Magnus recovery
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Magnus recovery
by Magnus Warrior Thu Aug 17, 2017 4:18 am
Camera opens to a hospital room and a man covered in bandages
Victoria Stone: We are here at Royal London Hospital in the burn unit trying to get some information on the condition of Magnus.... Um I don’t know whether we are calling him Dies Irae or Warrior these days. Anyway the staff here are being very closed mouthed about his condition but from what I can see it doesn’t look very promising for him to return to the ring anytime soon.Wait there is someone coming to visit Magnus, he is talking with the Doctors treating Magnus.
Now it looks like he is going in to see Magnus maybe we can get a word with him about the condition of Magnus
Camera pans to an elderly man wearing a hooded jacket
Victoria Stone:Excuse me sir, we are from UCW and we were wondering how he is doing ? Perhaps you can shed some light on his condition the hospital staff has not been very forthcoming with any details for our viewers
Elderly Man : Miss I have a very dear friend in a bad way I am sorry but I don’t have time for your foolish questions, now if you'll excuse me I need to check on my friend
The cameraman moves to the window of the burn unit to follow the elderly gentleman who can be seen taking various objects out of his jacket and arranging them on the table beside Magnus’s bed, a nurse comes and closes the curtain cutting off the view
Victoria Stone: Well no one is talking here back to you Alex and Jesse
Camera cuts
Back at UCW
Alexander Adams:What do you think that old man was doing Jesse? It almost looked like a ritual of some kind
Jesse 'The Body' Ventura: Who cares? Magnus is done for, you saw all the bandages and tubes running out of him now way he makes it back for the PPV. And even if he did manage to crawl out of the hospital he wouldn’t have the strength to fight off a puppy let alone Juggles, shame though his last match almost convinced me he had something left in him. What I want to know is what is Regal going to do about this?
Alexander Adams: Do about what Jesse? you don’t know if Juggles had anything to do with this.Did you see him anywhere near Magnus when it happened?
Jesse 'The Body' Ventura: Who else could it be? Magnus had just given him a proper beatdown and we both know Juggles is not the kind of guy who lets things like that go!
Alexander Adams: Even if you are right the security cameras clearly show Magnus alone in the boiler room Juggles was not there!
As Angels and Demons dance in the fires burning in the mind of Magnus he becomes aware that something else is happening also he smells familiar scents but he can't remember how he knows them at first, the world of Angels and Demons gradually fades as he becomes more aware of his surroundings. The view is fuzzy at first but he sees a figure in a brown hooded jacket making preparations of some sort.
Nurse:Sir I am going to have to ask you to stop right this minute you can't have those things in here!
as the nurse rushes to the hooded figure she accidentally bumps the bed jarring Magnus into this world abruptly and in pain. His eyes widen in surprise and disbelief even as he stammers Sensi? his mind trying to reconcile what he thinks he is seeing with what he believes
Magnus: But you're dead! I have been to your grave!
The nurse interrupts Magnus in mid sentence
Nurse: Magnus I assure you this person is very much alive and and in a whole lot of trouble!
The man in the brown jacket turns and faces the nurse and Magnus, Magnus begins tossing from side to side muttering "no no no no"
Sensi: Young lady calm yourself, I can and will have these "things" in here I have spoken with his doctors and received their blessing. Now please run along and speak to your supervisor and stop agitating Magnus can't you see he is very fragile right now.
the nurse is visibly flustered and begins to argue but Sensi dismisses her with a wave and turns to Magnus putting a hand on his shoulder to calm him.
Sensi: Magnus be at peace. you do not see a spirit, I am flesh and blood. After your school burned and for the part I had in that tragedy I decided to leave the Martial Arts forever, in that sense only am I dead. I have watched you for many years hoping your mind and soul would heal enough for me to reveal myself to you. It was I who left those things in your locker at UCW. Rest now we will speak more when you are strong enough.
A single tear rolls down the face of Magnus as he slips back into unconscious. his face seems to relax and he rests peacefully
scene fades out
Victoria Stone: We are here at Royal London Hospital in the burn unit trying to get some information on the condition of Magnus.... Um I don’t know whether we are calling him Dies Irae or Warrior these days. Anyway the staff here are being very closed mouthed about his condition but from what I can see it doesn’t look very promising for him to return to the ring anytime soon.Wait there is someone coming to visit Magnus, he is talking with the Doctors treating Magnus.
Now it looks like he is going in to see Magnus maybe we can get a word with him about the condition of Magnus
Camera pans to an elderly man wearing a hooded jacket
Victoria Stone:Excuse me sir, we are from UCW and we were wondering how he is doing ? Perhaps you can shed some light on his condition the hospital staff has not been very forthcoming with any details for our viewers
Elderly Man : Miss I have a very dear friend in a bad way I am sorry but I don’t have time for your foolish questions, now if you'll excuse me I need to check on my friend
The cameraman moves to the window of the burn unit to follow the elderly gentleman who can be seen taking various objects out of his jacket and arranging them on the table beside Magnus’s bed, a nurse comes and closes the curtain cutting off the view
Victoria Stone: Well no one is talking here back to you Alex and Jesse
Camera cuts
Back at UCW
Alexander Adams:What do you think that old man was doing Jesse? It almost looked like a ritual of some kind
Jesse 'The Body' Ventura: Who cares? Magnus is done for, you saw all the bandages and tubes running out of him now way he makes it back for the PPV. And even if he did manage to crawl out of the hospital he wouldn’t have the strength to fight off a puppy let alone Juggles, shame though his last match almost convinced me he had something left in him. What I want to know is what is Regal going to do about this?
Alexander Adams: Do about what Jesse? you don’t know if Juggles had anything to do with this.Did you see him anywhere near Magnus when it happened?
Jesse 'The Body' Ventura: Who else could it be? Magnus had just given him a proper beatdown and we both know Juggles is not the kind of guy who lets things like that go!
Alexander Adams: Even if you are right the security cameras clearly show Magnus alone in the boiler room Juggles was not there!
Back at the hospital a nurse rushes in hearing Magnus cryout
As Angels and Demons dance in the fires burning in the mind of Magnus he becomes aware that something else is happening also he smells familiar scents but he can't remember how he knows them at first, the world of Angels and Demons gradually fades as he becomes more aware of his surroundings. The view is fuzzy at first but he sees a figure in a brown hooded jacket making preparations of some sort.
Nurse:Sir I am going to have to ask you to stop right this minute you can't have those things in here!
as the nurse rushes to the hooded figure she accidentally bumps the bed jarring Magnus into this world abruptly and in pain. His eyes widen in surprise and disbelief even as he stammers Sensi? his mind trying to reconcile what he thinks he is seeing with what he believes
Magnus: But you're dead! I have been to your grave!
The nurse interrupts Magnus in mid sentence
Nurse: Magnus I assure you this person is very much alive and and in a whole lot of trouble!
The man in the brown jacket turns and faces the nurse and Magnus, Magnus begins tossing from side to side muttering "no no no no"
Sensi: Young lady calm yourself, I can and will have these "things" in here I have spoken with his doctors and received their blessing. Now please run along and speak to your supervisor and stop agitating Magnus can't you see he is very fragile right now.
the nurse is visibly flustered and begins to argue but Sensi dismisses her with a wave and turns to Magnus putting a hand on his shoulder to calm him.
Sensi: Magnus be at peace. you do not see a spirit, I am flesh and blood. After your school burned and for the part I had in that tragedy I decided to leave the Martial Arts forever, in that sense only am I dead. I have watched you for many years hoping your mind and soul would heal enough for me to reveal myself to you. It was I who left those things in your locker at UCW. Rest now we will speak more when you are strong enough.
A single tear rolls down the face of Magnus as he slips back into unconscious. his face seems to relax and he rests peacefully
scene fades out
Last edited by Magnus Dies Irae on Fri Aug 18, 2017 6:39 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Hank The Tank Harris Thu Aug 17, 2017 12:57 pm
Regal is away this week and Laz will be stepping into the GM's office and causing all kinds of trouble. I think this could work as a story angle as he could be looking out for Hank's interests...worrying that the magnus of old is back? So grant's Juggles request and say's if he doesn't make the match he is out of UCW?
If you dont like that we go with your other RP and perhaps the elderly man performs a healing ritual (think karate kid when Mr Muahgi heals Daniel during the tournament). Let me know what you think.
If you dont like that we go with your other RP and perhaps the elderly man performs a healing ritual (think karate kid when Mr Muahgi heals Daniel during the tournament). Let me know what you think.
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Magnus Warrior Thu Aug 17, 2017 1:15 pm
could amend the first to hint at that and do the second as you suggest do you know if Juggles will be writing anything for this show? the first segment isn't really all that long just the pictures make it seem bigger than it is 
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Hank The Tank Harris Thu Aug 17, 2017 3:27 pm
I think if we ask Juggles to write that meeting with Laz he would easily knock that up...Juggles style. Should i message him?
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Magnus Warrior Fri Aug 18, 2017 4:12 am
sounds good. so this is the final product, the rest of the Sensei / Magnus story is that another student of Sensei's was jealous and set the fire costing Magnus his son, brother and a few students Magnus had survivor's syndrome feeling guilty he survived and they did not leading to him parting ways with reality (note to self correct spelling of Sensei) lol anyway after the ppv Magnus Dies Irae will be no more only Magnus Warrior will remain with a new set of circumstances
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Hank The Tank Harris Fri Aug 18, 2017 10:58 am
Nice backstory...so much to draw upon! I'll message Juggy.
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Re: Magnus recovery
by Magnus Warrior Fri Aug 18, 2017 12:59 pm
meh probably a bit too much for an rp but the " I am going to kick everyone's ass" storyline is a bit played out for me, it has a place to be sure, I am just tired of writing it so I wanted a more real life story line. No capes or super powers, vulnerability instead of invincibility... If you think it's getting too involved for an rp just let me know 
I can always try for a short version
I can always try for a short version
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